Prosery: The great white plane

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During my meditation routine I sank deeper and deeper into a relaxed state. Suddenly something was different, a swirling sensation, I felt drawn into a vortex.

For some reason I knew what was happening, I was travelling through time and space.

I felt a cold breeze and opened my eyes to a wide plane of white. An icy cold plane as far as the eye could see.

I was where? I am when?

The snow began

This is a 144-word flash fiction piece for the Prosery prompt on dVerse. Merril is tending the virtual bar at the dVerse Poet’s Pub. The prompt Merril chose are these lines:

“I was where I am

When the snow began”

– From “The Dead of Winter” by Samuel Menashe

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8 Antworten to “Prosery: The great white plane”

I enjoyed your time-space travel story, and a very clever use of the prompt line!

merrildsmith said this on 6. Dezember 2023 um 23:34 | Antworten
- Thanks, I did not have time on the day itself, but your prompt sticked. And then I suddenly had some inspiration.
  
  zipferlake said this on 6. Dezember 2023 um 23:37 | Antworten
  - You’re welcome.
    As long as the prompt is open, you can respond. It doesn’t have to be the day the prompt is posted.
    
    merrildsmith said this on 7. Dezember 2023 um 21:13
Very creative use of the prompt line.

msjadeli said this on 8. Dezember 2023 um 23:19 | Antworten
- Thank you!
  
  zipferlake said this on 9. Dezember 2023 um 00:50 | Antworten
  - You’re welcome.
    
    msjadeli said this on 9. Dezember 2023 um 00:54
I like the way you broke up the line.

Melissa Lemay said this on 11. Dezember 2023 um 07:13 | Antworten
- Thanks, Melissa!
  
  zipferlake said this on 12. Dezember 2023 um 20:30 | Antworten

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