Copy cat

Created with Bing Image Creator (12.01.2024, powered by DALL-E 3)


Twenty years ago I studied in this city of love and great expectations
During my meditation routine I sank deeper and deeper into a relaxed state
On a rainy and cold Monday morning I dozed off
For natural marvel snow sets quite the bar
Lie on the heating
You’re my melalcoholia
Traveling like a baboon
Begin the difficult where it is still easy
Some day is hard
I process emotions, struggle and strife
Sometimes I only scratch the surface


Jan H. Hellberg (12.01.2024)


Laura from Poetrypix hosts Meeting the Bar today at dVerse. We shall compose found poetry, using first lines (one per month) of our poetry from 2023. As I did not have enough poems yet I just used 11 posts I had and combined the first lines of those.

I fed Bing Image Creator with my poem and directly loved this image from the first try (it always provides 4 suggestions)


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36 Antworten to “Copy cat”

  1. I enjoyed how this reads like the mind drifting off during meditation.

  2. Amazing how your beginning and ending lines work together so well.

  3. This is truly consistent with the image as well. – I truly love it.

  4. I love the illustration of a meditating monkey, it does fit the found poem well. The final lines resonate with me.

  5. This fits together so well! Gorgeous, gorgeous work done! ❤️❤️

  6. The poem works so well from that marvellous opening line (the AI art too)

  7. I do love how this flows like meditation, going from ordered thoughts, to the fleeting snippets that break through the calmness, and then back again. Brilliant piece.

  8. Genius, me thinks. Truly.

  9. „this city of love and great expectations“ – this is a great description

  10. This really works, Jan! I feel the same way, „sometimes I only scratch the surface“.

  11. This is very cool, especially „Begin the difficult where it is still easy.“ Good advice. Love the image too.

  12. Loved the poem, the ending packs a philosophical punch; I also love what the AI produced for you image wise.

  13. Love the way this fell together Jan. 🙂✌🏼

  14. A great ‚found‘ poem, Jan!

  15. I really like the lines you’ve chosen. This line, in particular, strikes me
    „Begin the difficult where it is still easy“

  16. Thank you so much for leaving me a comment … I thoroughly enjoyed this challenge … and especially your „found“ poem.

  17. Jan,

    Your found poem captures a vivid journey through different moments, expressing a range of emotions and experiences. The lines „Twenty years ago I studied in this city of love and great expectations“ evoke a sense of nostalgia and reflection, while the imagery of „For natural marvel snow sets quite the bar“ adds a touch of awe…

    ~David

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